The Perfect Explanation of Parallel Syntax With Great Examples

Explanation of Parallel Syntax with Examples
Parallel syntax refers to using a repetitive or similar pattern in the grammatical construction of the words in a sentence, for emphasis on an idea and to convey that the ideas are of equal importance. To help you understand this concept, we give you an explanation of parallel syntax with the help of some examples.
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Last Updated: Feb 10, 2018
Purpose of Parallel Syntax
► To give equal emphasis to certain words of a sentence
► To improve the flow of a sentence
► To convey the central idea
► To give a rhythmic effect
► To avoid letting the reader's mind be distracted.
Parallel syntax is a rhetorical device that is used to give equal importance to some of the words in a sentence, so that the tone of the sentence appears right. This is the feature of parallelism, i.e., it creates an appropriate rhythmic effect in a sentence. It also keeps the reader focused on the central idea of the sentence. It can improve clarity. Similar ideas can be expressed in a more effective way. It also leads to balancing of thoughts. While writing songs too, parallelism helps to make the lyrics more memorable, and easy to grasp. Such parallel structures can also be found in the Bible and other literary works.

To understand parallel structure in sentences, let's first consider a simple example.
Example #1
Janet likes watching movies, reading books, and cooking.


Janet likes to watch movies, read books, and cook.

Now, see this.

Janet likes to watch movies, reading books and cook.

Here, 'reading books' does not go well with the sentence formation. It does not appear synchronized. It looks awkward in the sentence structure, and fails to have the right impact.

Example #2
In order to win, you must have faith, confidence, and passion.
Faulty parallelism: In order to win, you must have faith, be confident and passionate.

Sounds incorrect, doesn't it? It also sounds unnatural while reading because the construct 'be confident and passionate' does not go in sync with 'must have faith'. Parallel structure refers to the use of a similar pattern of words and one should be able to read it in a smooth manner. This does not happen in the case above, as the pattern of words changes in the middle of the sentence.

Example #3
Stop existing, start living.
Both the parts of this sentence follow the same pattern. The verb 'stop' is followed by the gerund form of 'exist' in the first part. Similarly, the gerund form of 'live' follows the verb 'start' in the second part.

Example #4
I came, I saw, I conquered.
This is a classic example of parallel syntax, wherein there is repetition to create parallelism and give equal importance to all the three words.

Example #5
We keep moving forward, opening new doors and doing new things, because we are curious and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths. ― Walt Disney.

The words 'moving forward', 'opening new doors', and 'doing new things' appear to be in sync with each other, due to the parallel structure, thus giving equal importance to all the three verbs.
Famous Quotes that Use Parallel Structure
Mahatma Gandhi
"First they ignore you, then they ridicule you, then they fight you, and then you win." ― Mahatma Gandhi
Buddha at Mount Aso, Volcano
"There are two mistakes one can make along the road to truth - not going all the way, and not starting." ― Buddha
Leo Tolstoy postage stamp
"There will be today, there will be tomorrow, there will be always, and there was yesterday, and there was the day before." ― Leo Tolstoy
"Wisdom ceases to be wisdom when it becomes too proud to weep, too grave to laugh, and too selfish to seek other than itself." ― Kahlil Gibran
Martin Luther King Jr. stamp
"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." ― Martin Luther King Jr.
Parallelism in Literature
From 'The Great Gatsby' by F. Scott Fitzgerald
F. Scott Fitzgerald postage stamp
"He had thrown himself into it with a creative passion, adding to it all the time, decking it out with every bright feather that drifted his way."

"Thirty--the promise of a decade of loneliness, a thinning list of single men to know, a thinning brief-case of enthusiasm, thinning hair."
From Walt Whitman's poetry: 'Song of Myself'
Portrait of American Poet Walt Whitman
The feeling of health, the full-noon trill, the song of me rising from bed and meeting the sun.
We hope that the above examples will help you in understanding parallel syntax, and avoiding a faulty syntax while writing.